Achilles and the Tortoise: Rose down a river

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Delicate yet strong
living every moment
with her dance of bliss

Going with the flow
circumventing obstacles
into the sea of life

At 20 September, 2006, Known Stranger said...: the moment i finised reading the first para i felt it is about a river joing in sea and when i finished the last oh - i enjoyed the narration was to my way of thinking. good good
At 21 September, 2006, neermathalam said...: Came thru strngrs blog...
there is a great poet in malayalam named kunjunni master
u remind me of him..not the craft but teh size of poems..

btb..really gud....

circumventing obstacles
into the sea of life

quite amazing..:) I sud say...

and ur name scrodingers CAT ?? wat does it mean..i know one schrodinger eqtn..clueless me...
At 22 September, 2006, gautami tripathy said...: I see subtle change in your writing. More positive....
At 23 September, 2006, contraddict said...: Eternal Golden braid!!

EGB , GEB !!
neat -- i mean i havent finished reading the book but i simply love it..
reading undercover economist which is GUD 2
At 24 September, 2006, Neer said...: powerful verses! thank you for coming by! :)
At 26 September, 2006, Arti Honrao said...: "circumventing obstacles
into the sea of life"

Beautiful lines!

GBU
Arti